My Name =
Dylan Evans Presentation Date =
Friday Jan 8 2010
My Mentor =
Miss.Nash
Subject & sub-topics =
Artist Fee's
Ticket Sales
Hireing
Stage Crew
Security
Catering
Runners
Booking the venue
What kind of profit share
Billing
Gross potential
Merchandising
Thesis Question =
Are concert promoters receving a fair share of the profits from the ticket sales
Thesis Sentence =
Statements =
Concert promoters book venues
Concert promoters negation contracts with the bands
Concert promoters can make profit
Concert promoters do take financial risks
Elements of having to pay other first:(artist fee, merchandising, etc) are inconsistent with sales concert promoters are trying to make a larger profit
Elements of inital concert payments:(artist fees, merchandising, etc) are inconsistent with sales concert promters profit goals promoters desire
The profit goals concert promoters desire are not meet due to payouts
How Concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit (conclusion)
Premise(s) =
The elements of having to pay other first : artist fee’s, merchandising etc, are inconsistent with sales concert promoters are trying to make a larger profit.
Conclusion =
How Concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit
Thesis sentence (argument included) =
Are concert promoters receving a fair share of the concert ticket proceeds considering the responsibilites and the inherent risks involved in running a show.
Since the profit goals concert promoters desire are not meet due to concert payouts, it can be concluded that concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit
Thesis Question (enhanced) =
Since the profit goals concert promoters desire are not meet due to concert payouts,how do concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit
Dylan Evans
Presentation Date =
Friday Jan 8 2010
My Mentor =
Miss.Nash
Subject & sub-topics =
Thesis Question =
Are concert promoters receving a fair share of the profits from the ticket sales
Thesis Sentence =
Statements =
- Concert promoters book venues
- Concert promoters negation contracts with the bands
- Concert promoters can make profit
- Concert promoters do take financial risks
- Elements of having to pay other first:(artist fee, merchandising, etc) are inconsistent with sales concert promoters are trying to make a larger profit
- Elements of inital concert payments:(artist fees, merchandising, etc) are inconsistent with sales concert promters profit goals promoters desire
- The profit goals concert promoters desire are not meet due to payouts
- How Concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit (conclusion)
Premise(s) =The elements of having to pay other first : artist fee’s, merchandising etc, are inconsistent with sales concert promoters are trying to make a larger profit.
Conclusion =
How Concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit
Thesis sentence (argument included) =
Thesis Question (enhanced) =
Since the profit goals concert promoters desire are not meet due to concert payouts,how do concert promoters change contracts to increase their profit